This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
i had to make a google drawing we had had to pick a spiass in my class. i did one what was in a group that want be a spiass but we cod do it. i hop you like it :)
Hi Lochlan! It's me Arie! I like this piece of work because it shows that even if your cool you won't be mean to friends. This reminds me of when I made my drawing about being nice. But maybe you can fix your spelling because I see lots of mistakes. Cya Lochlan!
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Hi Lochlan! It's me Arie! I like this piece of work because it shows that even if your cool you won't be mean to friends. This reminds me of when I made my drawing about being nice. But maybe you can fix your spelling because I see lots of mistakes. Cya Lochlan!
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