This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
at school i did a Introducing about me on a google drawing. what was easy is making a character what was hard is writing the words what was fun is the character and potting on the colour what was.
Hey Lochlan, I loved how you put on some information but not private information. Maybe you could fix your writing because a few word are not spell t correctly. This reminds me of the all about me on my blog you should check it out some time. Also can you tell me some reasons why you like those games? By Arie.
Hi Lochlan I liked the colour of your background and can you tell how do make such a cool background like yours. I just wanted to tell you that you spelt mince wrong, so maybe you should change it. Your post reminds me of the way I introduced myself.
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Hey Lochlan, I loved how you put on some information but not private information. Maybe you could fix your writing because a few word are not spell t correctly. This reminds me of the all about me on my blog you should check it out some time. Also can you tell me some reasons why you like those games? By Arie.
ReplyDeleteHi Lochlan I liked the colour of your background and can you tell how do make such a cool background like yours. I just wanted to tell you that you spelt mince wrong, so maybe you should change it. Your post reminds me of the way I introduced myself.
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