This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lochlan James from shs. I really like your post the teeth really stand out with the glittering on the teeth. You could of changed the man you was saying the information move a bit more like swaying his hands up and down every time the slide changes. Next time add more animation in the character next time. Did you think of coloring the background.
Hi Lochlan I saw this post. I like your animation. I think you need to add how many minutes do you have to brush your teeth for. This reminds me of me brushing my teeth. How did you make the hair in your picture?
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Hi Lochlan James from shs. I really like your post the teeth really stand out with the glittering on the teeth. You could of changed the man you was saying the information move a bit more like swaying his hands up and down every time the slide changes. Next time add more animation in the character next time. Did you think of coloring the background.
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Hi Lochlan I saw this post. I like your animation. I think you need to add how many minutes do you have to brush your teeth for. This reminds me of me brushing my teeth. How did you make the hair in your picture?
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