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12 April, 2017
The great fire of London
On the second floor i was practicing playing marbles in my bedroom. Dad came and said there was a fire coming so i came with him out the door. I brought some apples and bananas with me and we went on a paddling boat and sailed to an island far away. There was a pick axe left on a table, so we built a house out of stone and bricks. We made it a one story so if the fire goes up or any more fires people wouldn't take a long time to go down.. We put our stuff and food inside. We made it nice and cosy.
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