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Hi Lochlan, I really like how you gave us an idea on how to help someone out. Do you help people out? do you help people up when they get hurt? Maybe next time you could give us a bit more info like why you had to do this.
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Hi Lochlan,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you gave us an idea on how to help someone out. Do you help people out? do you help people up when they get hurt? Maybe next time you could give us a bit more info like why you had to do this.
Yours Sincerely Grace
Yaldhurst Model School