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28 March, 2018

flamethrower writing

Lochlan Flamethrower



When it came out it looked like a
dragon fiering the flame
out the mouth it looked
like a lava robot from a
different universe, getting
more fire then go back where
it come from.
The lava robot look like
a normal robot but with lava on
top and  three swords on
the arm. If i was next to the
flamethrower I would get a fire
extinguisher and a fire suit.

In writing we have been learning about using wow words we watched a slow motion video about a flamethrower then we brainstormed wow words and similes to describe the flame

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